GrapheneKid's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dirty Needles [Jamuary Day 3]]

I'll save myself from going on a tirade about Russia, but I will say this was an interesting vocal sample to utilize. The instrumentation is really nice, almost entrancing, like a good light show at its peak, but it didn't really feel like there was anything thematically connecting the vocals to the instruments.

Also, "figured AIDs was the best I could do today" sounds amazing out of context

Quarl responds:

AIDs ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Jamuary 2023 - day 3 - old roots]

Very cool! Admittedly I don't have much knowledge about dub music but this sounds pretty dang legit. The wobble synth in the back (the one that sounds like an octave higher than the wobble bass) got a little bit repetitive though, I think maybe it's the high end of it that's standing out so much to me, but aside from that it's programmed really well.

arbelamram responds:

i tottally agree about the the repetitive synth, i have some ideas to for making a VIP for this hehe ^^

and thank u very much! ♥

[Trouser Snake - Jamuary Day 3]

Not bad! I think the mix feels a little on the lighter side of things for an anime intro, but the melodies and progression (especially when that orchestra comes in) feel spot-on, and it's the perfect length too!

I like to imagine the track name is also the title of the anime, so in the beginning or in the end of the intro video there should totally be a gruff Japanese man shouting "TUROUSA SUNEIKU!"

ZaazNG responds:

Thank you so much!! I do agree that the mix is a bit light, and the title shout is such a brilliant idea, I wish I could have included it lmao

[(#2) Seasoning]

Completing a song of any length or type each day is impressive regardless of any issues with the final product. What's important is that you're developing your skills! Don't be afraid to adjust your pace if you feel like burnout is coming up.

I love the percussion here, it has just the right amount of punch and some impressive hat/cymbal work. The whole song gives me Egyptian desert vibes. It's smooth but imposing, with the kind of progression you hear in a lot of desert-themed areas in media. Very nice!

FL-DMD responds:

I love your analogy. And I really appreciate the inspiring words form you. I checked your stuff out as well and I must say I’m hooked on your Day 3 track 😍.

Haha you’re so right about this Egyptian vibe. I kinda didn’t really think of that until you brought it up though.

[Ghost Town - Jamuary #2]

This melody sure gave me a spook. Very nice use of what I assume is the EarthBound soundfont! The beat feels a little sparse though, I feel like some hihats could have helped fill some of that silence.

TwistedFW responds:

Good Guess on the Earthbound Sound font XD and yea I can definitely see what you mean, adding hi hats could've helped a lot. Thanks! :3

[luv u]

I wasn't expecting a song in this genre to have such good gloomy, atmospheric undertones to it. The vocals add a lot of depth to the song and your percussion is so tight and weighty.

Hairmilked responds:

🥰🥰🥰

[Carry on (Day 2)]

A beautiful piece. A lot of the progressions here remind me of the stuff you see in Japanese orchestral scores. Nice dissonant touches here and there that really sell the whole idea of encountering adversity and being determined to overcome it.

SilverPoyozo responds:

Thank you! Definitely heavily inspired by jrpg osts.

[JAMUARY 2023 (day 1) - Sting]

This is good! You kept things simple and sweet. I love the lower-fidelity feel of the whole composition. Definitely gives me a "sneaky" vibe!

Viraxor responds:

As people say: simplicity is the key to happiness. Thank you!

[Floating On A Beat]

Short, sweet and very jazzy, but I am so offended that I'm not allowed to smoke in the terminal building. 5 stars.

SageIsReal responds:

Thanks for the support!
And sorry bro, I don't make the rules...lol.